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Be more explicit about next steps with QuerySet
When I was reading through the tutorial, I got to this section and read
```
The last missing part is passing the `posts` QuerySet to the template
context. Don't worry – we will cover how to display it in a later
chapter.
```
On a first read, this confused me -- I thought in both sentences we were
talking about the same action (passing `posts` into the `render` call
and displaying it in the template); making it additionally confusing
that we were doing _some_ work in this chapter about passing in posts.
I wondered whether the "next chapter" sentence was even necessary, and
found this in the commit logs:
8db3c91.
Noting that the ordering of the sentences had confused participants, and
they apparently wanted to hear that they were going to cover displaying
`posts` before an explanation of what `posts` was, I'm inferring that
they have an intuition that this is missing and want to hear what the
next steps are.
So I tried to break up that sentence into two clearly separate steps,
explaining what we'll do next and what we'll do later.1 parent c212a42 commit 51bfe80
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