Update 2024-08-20-meetup.md

Co-authored-by: Nicholas Mullen <nwmullen@gmail.com>

Author: joahg

_meetups/2024-08-20-meetup.md

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 Or: "How a Rails developer read the docs, achieved enlightenment, and learned to love React server components"
 
-It would be an exploration of the pain and oddities of how traditional web frameworks attempt to handle high-interactivity dynamic uis and how modern front end frameworks similarly handle low-interactivity static content pages.
+An exploration of the pain and oddities of how traditional web frameworks attempt to handle high-interactivity dynamic UIs, and how modern front-end frameworks similarly introduce complexity to support low-interactivity static UIs.
 
 Little bit of history-of-the-web, different live coding examples, some educational content around server components. Maybe even talk about Elixer/Phoenix, time allowing.