rewording

Author: zesameri

alhambra.html

@@ -42,13 +42,11 @@ <h1 class="header">
             I visited the Nasrid Palaces of the Alhambra this past summer. 
             After staying up late to secure an early ticket, 
             I woke before dawn to climb to the estate's entrance. 
-            It felt sacred, like reaching to Allah. 
+            Like reaching to Allah, it felt sacred. 
             As a child, I wanted to become a mosaicist, 
             shaping glass squares into flowing forms. 
             I rekindled that wonder through reconstructing these patterns. 
-            Now I have begun to grasp the centuries of geometry behind them. 
-            My digital version lacks character, but deconstructing these patterns, 
-            I start to feel their logic and devotion.
+            Centuries of geometry unravelling, I can feel their devotion.
 
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